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posted March 11th, 2015, 2:06 am

Your name is old, your name is old, you gotta keep the bottoms of your trousers rolled

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March 11th, 2015, 2:29 am

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Tuomi tries to save what's left of his clothed human dignity. Obviously he is very successful!

I decided what I'm going to do for TCAF, and it's going to be a Raistlin/Dragonlance activity book! I'll be posting small previews of the pages on tumblr in case you'd like to see some. I'm still unsure whether to print it here or somewhere in North America, but this has to become clear to me sooner rather than later.

I've been animating this one page for FG for some time, and it's the first one that is going to be ready so close to the deadline that I might be willing to stream some animation stuff soonish. I don't know if that's a thing people would like to see? If it happens I'll announce it on tumblr as well!

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March 11th, 2015, 12:18 pm

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Is Weed makind many weird faces?

Cause I found her really good looking last page now I'm confused.
My conclusion was it must be hard to make closed mouth expressions on her cause she has quite big upper teeth...

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March 11th, 2015, 12:26 pm

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@BurstThrough: It's embarrassing, but mostly it's just me, not her. Also the angle is different, somehow this is a hard one to get right?

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March 11th, 2015, 1:20 pm

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@Cesario: I analysed a bit again it seems her right teeth in first pannel needs outlining to separate it from the rest of the teeth arcade.

And on the last it seems to be her nose as it looks a bit hooky.

Note:I moved the cursor over those and her face looked better that's my method as bloking the teeth on the last made it look the same I tested on the nose.
And again it may be the perspective so what do I know?

I'm not insulting just displaying a bit of as I see it in a constructive way.And I understand you do this in your free time so I'm simply honored to see the fruits of your talent you give here for free and am enjoying the privilege to let my words reach and make clear the awsome and what may need a bit of work.

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March 11th, 2015, 1:51 pm

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@BurstThrough: That's interesting! I'm probably going to go through stuff like this for the printed version like I did the first chapter.

No insult seen! It is constructive to try and point out the exact thing you think could make things better. Due to obvious time constraints I might not be able to touch on it right away, or ever, but I can at least think about it and try better next time if it seems legit. :) Thank you for being considerate about it though, I do think showing you care makes taking critique and advice a lot easier.

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