posted August 1st, 2012, 2:12 am

it's that person with the weird hair again

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December 5th, 2012, 5:38 am



More fog and hedrerows. Nice posture in the third panel. The movement of the foot is unclear to me. I think, if the posture is emphasized enough, you don't need to draw "motion lines" to indicate motion.

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December 5th, 2012, 5:51 am



@alkimohap: Thank you for this actually useful critique! I'll keep that in mind (though you probably won't see any specific improvement until a lot later since our page buffer is pretty big). I'll go through the pages again before print anyway so here's hoping I'll catch this and other similar ones.

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